</>The grass flowers smell
That was amazing
I can`t stay in Hole
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How beautifully you have brought out the snake's response to its lovely surroundings! Rural people's life and their awareness of nature, their predictions are all highly valuable to decide many things in life. Lovely poem. Marks 10+++
a beautiful poem, beautified by the memmory o mother and child hood. voted10 surya
as i am frm south india, i could excatly get what the crux of poem is very nice poem!
Yellow venom........terrific write felt the serpentine air inside this one.A good and poignant write.