Saturday, December 13, 2008

Snakes Comments

Rating: 5.0

</>The grass flowers smell
That was amazing

I can`t stay in Hole
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Vinod Kumar U K
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Allemagne Roßmann 25 August 2011

Yellow venom........terrific write felt the serpentine air inside this one.A good and poignant write.

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Rekha Mandagere 30 July 2011

How beautifully you have brought out the snake's response to its lovely surroundings! Rural people's life and their awareness of nature, their predictions are all highly valuable to decide many things in life. Lovely poem. Marks 10+++

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Surya . 14 October 2009

a beautiful poem, beautified by the memmory o mother and child hood. voted10 surya

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 15 March 2009

THIS IS REALLY GOOD, VINODUK.

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Tara Chettur 21 December 2008

as i am frm south india, i could excatly get what the crux of poem is very nice poem!

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Fiona Davidson 16 December 2008

Another great write...love this one...thank you

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Marria Attar 13 December 2008

Wow...you're use of words are very understanding-liked it!

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Vinod Kumar U K

Vinod Kumar U K

kannur-kerala-India
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