Thursday, January 7, 2016

Snake Melon Comments

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Beside a pond in main,
High and thin sugarcane.
Under green canes,
Snake melon vines
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Lily YANG
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Terry Craddock 14 January 2016

Harvest In Villiages Nature Embraces cultivation links into beauty as nature provides fertile soil gift sustaining life water climate suited to grown crops harvest labour villiage shared first fruits crops love gift given bare face hands legs feet best suit bodies toil in mud near water harvest is gathered best as land dictates labour styles in villiages nature embraces Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Snake Melon' by the poet Lily YANG. Dedicated to the poet Lily YANG.

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Terry Craddock 14 January 2016

cultivation links into beauty, as nature provides fertile soil, gift life water, climate suited to grown crops, harvest labour shared, first fruits of crops love gift given, bare face hands legs feet, best suit bodies toil in mud near water, harvest is gathered best as land dictates labour styles 10+

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2016

Object of life! ! With the muse of the works on the farm. Nice work.

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