Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Snake In The Grass Comments

Rating: 3.1

Mr. Rao was sitting in his front lawn
He looked dull and worried
'I haven't mowed for a month'
He said looking at the wild growth
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Sathya Narayana
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Miriam Maia Padua 11 October 2011

very nice Sir Sathya..interesting.. makes me read twice...a nice story in poetry We miss you here at PH, Sir.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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