Snakes need to eat too. They get such a bad rap, they should try being the poor snake.
hide little mouse....... there is danger before you in the garden....... fine. in short verses you convey fell my dear priest poet. thank u. tony
Wow, if I were the mouse I will make a.dart for the bush or wherever.. A cleverly write, Father Kostas. You made me feel like a frightened child. So vividly depicted..10+++++++++++
I can imagine the situation! A Beautiful Haiku! Liked it so much! (10)
Please read My poem, #47 on Page 2, " Cursed in the Garden" You'll see what the poor creature (snake) had to go through and goes through.