Snake Dance Poem by Kostas Lagos

Snake Dance

Rating: 5.0


In the grass
a snake is dancing
hide li'l mouse!

Thursday, June 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,hunting,mouse,snake
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 05 July 2017

'' li'l '' .. is it '' the ''?

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Luz Hanaii 26 May 2019

Please read My poem, #47 on Page 2, " Cursed in the Garden" You'll see what the poor creature (snake) had to go through and goes through.

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Luz Hanaii 26 May 2019

Snakes need to eat too. They get such a bad rap, they should try being the poor snake.

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Kostas Lagos 28 May 2019

I love snakes! Still I would give mouse a warning...

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 August 2018

hide little mouse....... there is danger before you in the garden....... fine. in short verses you convey fell my dear priest poet. thank u. tony

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Kostas Lagos 19 August 2018

Thank you my friend. Such a kind comment

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2018

Wow, if I were the mouse I will make a.dart for the bush or wherever.. A cleverly write, Father Kostas. You made me feel like a frightened child. So vividly depicted..10+++++++++++

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Kostas Lagos 06 July 2018

I am with the snake! I love reptiles! Thank you RM!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 July 2018

I can imagine the situation! A Beautiful Haiku! Liked it so much! (10)

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Kostas Lagos 06 July 2018

Thanks a lot! I'm sure that the mouse didn't like it though....

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