Monday, July 28, 2008

Snake- Bite Comments

Rating: 4.9

The serpent has mingled with my blood

As she devours me, I become her lover
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Carol Nichols 26 July 2017

This is amazing. Beautiful writing can come out of the most painful experiences, pain that you imagine can only end in death. Very nice.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 May 2013

A very dramatic occurance. Be careful!

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Fay Slimm 09 August 2008

What a heartfelt memory of horrific happenings. Too vivid no doubt to be recalled without pain. Brilliantly portrayed. Fay

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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 August 2008

this is amazing. I started feeling dizzy....... slowly........ reading your deadly experience. More interesting is that you could write this experience in such simple words so succinctly.10

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