Friday, November 16, 2012

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'Go and dream all are selfish and shop-strawbarry
Ashflower is flowting from an ashtree
All is not true, here is yet cream
Taking this someone goes sleep far from your dream1! '
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Debasish Tewary
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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2015

I understand. Writing about it can help. Peace

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2012

debasish, yes, it looks like you don't know english very well...........i agree with you BUT it is nice that you are making the attempt to use it. thanks for sharing! i was attracted by the title, but i don't understand it.....the title or the poem. at least your note about the poem explained it partially. just a note on english (american english anyway) spellings. i spell them strawbErry and floAting. BUT we do have the words Barry (a person's name) and flow. bri

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