Friday, October 13, 2017

Snail...... The Fearless Comments

Rating: 5.0

Intense weather, cool and soggy
Composed smell of Soil
Sense of exaggeration, quietly moving snail, gliding in its style sloppy
On the Wall, with Sluggish pace, facing Nature's Turmoil
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Vidya Pandarinath
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Binayakumar Mohanty 15 October 2017

Lazy but certainly handles transition. Sensible lines. Nicely crafted poem. I loved it.

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