The frog proclaims unabashedly
Within hearing of everyone
He brags that he has paid his dues
And did it even before the last hour,
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A well observed piece, good use of metaphors, thanks, 10 Lynda xx
The word, 'smug' has never come into my mind in regard to frogs. It does now. A wonderful metaphorical write. Warm regards, Sandra
it reminds me of a story i read and when i was little. a frog was proud and believed it was the biggest thing in the world. one day, one of his friends saw an ox and told him about it. he couldn't believe that so he kept sucking air in to make himself bigger until he exploded. haha.. that's what it reminds me of
A very personification of words lovely imagery painted...meaningful write...10++++
I think there is a future for this frog in politics! Great poem.