Friday, February 20, 2009

Smug Frog Comments

Rating: 5.0

The frog proclaims unabashedly
Within hearing of everyone
He brags that he has paid his dues
And did it even before the last hour,
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Eddie Roa
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Patti Masterman 02 March 2009

I think there is a future for this frog in politics! Great poem.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 27 February 2009

Awesome poem. I love frogs.

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Abraham De La Torrre 24 February 2009

Way to go! But the site insists that I write at least 50 characters so way to go!

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Francisco R. Albano 24 February 2009

Now this is an excellent poem.

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

A well observed piece, good use of metaphors, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Joseph Poewhit 20 February 2009

'the cold of the puddle' - I like that line

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Sandra Fowler 20 February 2009

The word, 'smug' has never come into my mind in regard to frogs. It does now. A wonderful metaphorical write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Angelica Dela Cruz 20 February 2009

it reminds me of a story i read and when i was little. a frog was proud and believed it was the biggest thing in the world. one day, one of his friends saw an ox and told him about it. he couldn't believe that so he kept sucking air in to make himself bigger until he exploded. haha.. that's what it reminds me of

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Catrina Heart 20 February 2009

A very personification of words lovely imagery painted...meaningful write...10++++

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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