Wednesday, November 25, 2020

Smouldering Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Smoulder me not yet
your smile alone envelopes
all lovers must be like you
shockingly electrifying too
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M Asim Nehal 26 November 2020

What a wonderful statement: life is a burning fire revive my living desire...10**** Keep it up, Sir... amazing to know that at 80 you are younger than 30.

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Varsha M 25 November 2020

Enjambment star nicely using your words skill.... Winter is here Smouldering charcoal Warm the air Keeping cosier all. Smouldering relationship Keeps warmth built On path to dust, servicing heap Ignite even though not bright....... smouldering love always serves purpose.

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