Smouldering Love Poem by me poet yeps poet

Smouldering Love

Rating: 5.0


Smoulder me not yet
your smile alone envelopes
all lovers must be like you
shockingly electrifying too

ere in the lightning
in the sky
they are embellished
so love your smile
all my while

but let me enjoy
my dear poets
my home on Earth
till we or our
your kind of souls meet
as per your desire
since your birth

till then within me
ignite a warm fire
as I smoulder and merge
with you wholly entire

burn me not
in your love's fire
let me enjoy my life
yet before I reachthe pyre
your smile and love
all the more
I'd forever admire

if you also encompass me
as in love we both fire
to become ashes for ever
to commemorate
your intense burning desire

Wednesday, November 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
life is a burning fire
revive my living desire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 26 November 2020

What a wonderful statement: life is a burning fire revive my living desire...10**** Keep it up, Sir... amazing to know that at 80 you are younger than 30.

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Varsha M 25 November 2020

Enjambment star nicely using your words skill.... Winter is here Smouldering charcoal Warm the air Keeping cosier all. Smouldering relationship Keeps warmth built On path to dust, servicing heap Ignite even though not bright....... smouldering love always serves purpose.

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