Sunday, August 4, 2013

Smouldering Embers Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a world of smouldering embers
the fires wait to burn
they will burn for the innocent
they will burn for the victims
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Dave Alan Walker
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Hazel Durham 09 August 2013

Let the flames of the fires blaze forever for justice to prevail and the innocent to be always heard! Beautiful write!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 August 2013

A wonderful and inspiring write about the embers smouldering.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Beautiful poem. Its true fire will burn for all. Good write.

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R.j. Wynn 06 August 2013

The fires should honestly be for the less fortunate.

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Heather Wilkins 06 August 2013

the fires will burn for all yes they will good write

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David Wood 06 August 2013

A burning question waiting for answers. The trouble is nobody cares, they are all looking after number one, particularly our leaders.

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Valerie Dohren 04 August 2013

And the sooner they start burning, the better, Dave. Good one.

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Ramesh Rai 04 August 2013

great and inspiring write.

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Lucifera Santez 04 August 2013

burning. a very inspiring write. please read some of mine. :)

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