Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Smothered Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Innocence of tender age
ripped apart by animals....
Wiped away the smile of an angel
Never ever to bloom its fragrance...
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Jaishree Nair
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Indira Renganathan 27 October 2015

Very powerful work Jaishree.You have used the right words in right expression..Let us all hope for the final day of evil...God bless you

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Valsa George 25 October 2015

These days the molestation on innocent children are rising on an alarming rate! Wickedness has no greater manifestation! Those beasts should be put in chains to teach the world that their heinous deeds deserve such punishments! The anguish and indignation everyone feels is put in powerful words! Great job!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 October 2015

Heartless beasts with empty souls minds boiling with vile thoughts To hide their hideous face and minds No place on earth so dark Verily, vile thoughts make man, a beast on earth and he acts brutally washing away his innocence and making innocent people his victims.......10

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

We are but animals, and our actions are convincing proof. Thanks, Jaishree

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Rajnish Manga 13 October 2015

We all share the anguish carried by the poem against the inhuman deeds of ruthless satanic minds of the worst kind. Very poignant yet very caustic. A quote: Innocence of tender age / torn apart by animals / Heartless beasts with souls / boiling with vile thoughts

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 October 2015

Yeah, we are going through a tough time. Nice drop.

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