Smooth Like That Comments

Beautiful romantic piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Yoni and do remain enriched.

Now’s my chance I pull her to dance She’s soon in a trance I’m smooth like that......very good......... the concept of sin after drinking...... and how you behave..... very nice poem dear poet. thank you. tony

You had fun writing this, and it shows! ! I love how it concludes with a lunch date the following day, as opposed to the expected one-night-stand. :)

hehe.... nice..... seriously though, amazing poem. your a really great poet. 10!

I enjoyed it buddy....., looks like you may know where it's at....! ! ! Regards, Trade Martin.