Tuesday, August 27, 2019

Smooth Kind Comments

Rating: 5.0

He looked so cool.
When he wore his Stacy Adams shoes.
They had that forever shine.
That went well with hot chicks and red wine.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2019

His shoes gave the sign. That he was the smooth kind.......impressive lines. Beautiful poem. Well executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2019

Excellent poem, best end rhymes. Good story, attractive to read, nice presentation. A 10 Full Scoreand more.

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