Saturday, September 24, 2016

Smoking Tom.... [ S H O R T; 'bad' Habits; Dedicated To Tom Billsborough, A Friend On P H, Even Though He I S English! ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's not too unlike a smoking gun,
bringing death with the setting sun.
I don't ever smoke cigar or cigarette,
but my brain may smoke when I am upset.
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Bri Edwards
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Valsa George 30 September 2016

It is humorous in tone, but gives a grave warning to all smokers! The best line in the poem is......'my brain may smoke when I am upset.'.........................So very true! ! .

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 30 September 2016

Humorous, funny, well-written.

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Kim Barney 25 September 2016

Did you hear that Tom is going to China? Instead of Smoking Tom, Now you can call him Peking Tom! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2016

the poem is written as i would speak it to my friend Tom. ;) bri

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