Monday, August 26, 2013

Smoking In The Rain Comments

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The smokers stand in pouring rain,
No cool act can disguise their pain.
What compensation can they gain
For cold, and passerby's disdain?
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Stephen Wylie
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Ghost Legend 06 January 2014

It appears to be the case that human life largely consists of a battle against tendencies- addictions that negatively impact our lives. The lines between right and wrong blur many times, and lesser evils are thought of as remedial. Nice poem; I thought that the instance of smokers hindering their existence in response to cravings was a strong image.

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