Tuesday, March 13, 2012

Smoking In The Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dust bowl of my poisoned breath
The tepid low narcotic test
The tempered brain falls from the nest
The captive tied a King in jest
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Ross Mackay
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Kasia Fedyk 18 May 2012

Great Ross, I am actually speechless, its fantastically written. :)

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Calico Jack 20 April 2012

The rhythm in this poem was striking.

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