Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Smoking A Cigarette One Day Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The fly
fights for it's life
to fly through
an invisible wall
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Raymond Rivera
fly freedom smoking
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Tj Minchew 14 March 2010

Love this poem. keep writing.

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Chelsea Brink 02 March 2010

I love the last stanza. Nice work. (Thanks for the comments as well.)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 February 2010

i am a smoker friend...don't know what to say

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Raymond Rivera

Raymond Rivera

Naguabo, Puerto Rico
Raymond Rivera
Raymond Rivera
Naguabo, Puerto Rico
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