He smokes, I smoke
then the others is smoking too
what this world is coming to
people dying & livers is too..
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i hope all smokers see this poem! ! ! ! very good idea i liked it....thanks for sharing!
Your poem is short but impressively succinct.. Ingrained with a nice message. Full 10 Kushal
a good advocate write against smoking...very good I am with you with this write...a powerful message....10
Well...why do ppl kill...why do ppl steal Life carries all kinds of ppl....some good, some bad Some ugly...lol some are nasty, Well express poem 10s haha
Smoking kills you, it's little doses of suicide and it's addictive. Years ago it was fashionable because folk didn't know what it did to them. The only people that benefit from cigarettes are the people that make them and sell them. The rest of us are the fall guys. I've never smoked and never would...give it up if you can... Ruthy
It's so true, we do do it in groups. I guess some ppl do it in groups to feel less wrong about it? At least that was the case with me. Love the poem, it's hard cause you get adedicted. I know it was hard for me to stop, but you gotta do what u gotta do, right? Great job.
to be frank we get nowhere with smoking, rather we become slave to it.it needs good determination, to stop this, because it will harm our systenm in the long run.
My Rents Smoke + My Sister; its Disgusting, But i Love This Poem.. Because i HATE Smoking!
nice poem i hope that when others read it realise the danger of smoking.
I pray, the smokers' world listens to you....a needy poem...great write