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Joseph Daly 01 June 2006

A great piece of writing. For me the lack of capitalisation leaves some of your pieces down. The great American poet Oppen was averse to this because he felt that the word is important enough for it to be punctuated. each line of his work starts with capitalisation. That said you employ language in a powerful and expressive manner.

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