Saturday, November 12, 2005

Smoke Rings Comments

Rating: 5.0

He sat in the old Parlor chair
endlessly smoking cigarettes
Smoke rings above his head
Everyone had to be quiet
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Charles Chaim Wax 12 November 2005

really gets to the point how some others some utterly refused kindness in their life and how you feel about that and so well expressed I shudder yet feel joy at reading this poem giving hope to others to come through whatever happened to them

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