Friday, December 14, 2007
Smoke If You Wish Comments
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I love the banter and the flow
of witticisms to and fro.
When friends foregather for a while
to raise a glass or two and smile.
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Ian Bowen
14 December 2007
Ivor, this flowed like a silver springting stream. I would however, if I had composed it, have changed the last line to read: 'Nor I suspect, will we ever be.' Hope you take my suggested edit with good heart.
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9/15/2025 4:06:01 PM # 1.0.0
An interesting debate i'm sure! Good write Ivor! ! ! *10*! Thad