Smoke From The Chimney* Comments

This is simply evocative and beautiful.

You've taken me back to a somewhere long ago, yet paradoxically perhaps far far ahead. What a wonderment. Living's mystery held up to the light in a sweet shower of words. As an old friend of mine would say of such things of beauty: Ain't it great! This poem is great.

Ah, how well I remember those young itchy feet, beautiful poem.

I really enjoyed this poem with its effortless flow. Well done.

An excellent poem in a fine tune/ Top marksss

I had similar memories. Just wish I could express them so vividly. Those kind of things will linger as long as we. Another poetic gem

A very inspired poem, and beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading.

A fabulous rhymin poem i enjoyd readin! Down yor memory lane. Wish i cud write like u when im yor age.