Thursday, November 6, 2008

Smoke Filled Visions Comments

Rating: 5.0

Golden peach and amber streaks through blue
Lightly suspended below dark billowing clouds
A cool autumn breeze touches my cheek
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Patricia Gale
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Meggie Gultiano 11 November 2008

an wonderful piece, beautiful flow of words. I love it

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 November 2008

Patricia how many of us have visions of our love, in such beautiful moments like these... Andrew 10

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Kris Smith 06 November 2008

All I can say is that poem had me therePatricia absolutely beautiful its so nice to read you again 10 Chris

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Howard Johnson 06 November 2008

Excellent piece, Patricia, , enjoyed its story and immagery, And loved the last line

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