Friday, March 27, 2009

Smoke And Mirrors Comments

Rating: 5.0

the free for the free
the prison cell is calling me
when death approaches that's what my future will be
gone through temporary restraint
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Mara SalvatruchaDemon
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Eyan Desir 07 April 2009

Fun reading Good write

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Naidz Ladia 30 March 2009

lines are all fine..words are all real and true.., , , , this piece is very sensitive..it is a touching piece where everyone needs to understand the emotion written here..to the author, , , , just keep on writing..cheers naizz

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