Monday, November 11, 2019

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Tom Allport
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Bri Edwards 17 November 2019

2 - " The phrase you can't have your cake and eat it too means that there are two options that someone wants, but they can't have both because the options conflict with each other, so they can only pick one."

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2019

1 - and i thought this was going to be an advertisement for tobacco products! ! ! i like this though i'm not sure i understand it. does your poem mean i have to be home with my wife, instead of at the apartment of my mistress, in order to make peace with my wife? ? ? i might give it a try. bri ;) but can't i 'have my cake and eat it too'? **

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Kingsley Egbukole 11 November 2019

Short with deep meaning Give you a ten. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.

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