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You would be Searching... and searching Your lungs Heart Liver... environment and its effects, smoke, all that destroys the healthy environment that God provided for us. tony

A brilliant work on environmental pollution, well conceived and nicely crafted with conviction. An insightful creation by an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

You would be Searching... and searching Your lungs Heart Liver Corn fields... Everything, Searching In the smoke! - - - - - - - - A powerful and unique write on environmental pollution, thanks for sharing.

This poem is a powerful indictment against pollution of the environment. Excellent write, Kanishka!

Wonderful poem..... A great poem on enviornmental pollution.

You would be Searching... and searching Your lungs Heart Liver- - - a very fine poem on enviornmental pollution......... fine poem which makes us think dear poet. thank you for this poem.. tony

Wow....a great poem.

Wonderful...Really a great poem.

We need to look at the environment and see what man is doing to it. A great poem.