Saturday, December 13, 2014

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I'm bringing you the best
Only the best is for you
I love to love and laugh and jest
From dawn till night is kazoo
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Bull Hawking
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Bull Hawking 14 December 2014

Thanks Mandolin for the suggestions.....and the....all caps for sure. One error crept into my ending when I retyped it.....the word shoring....should be....shorn....because it was a veiled reference to Samson & Delilah....after his hair was cut off....it is one of the saddest love stories ever told....he was betrayed when he trusted her most....it cost him everything.

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