Smitten Comments

Smitten by a hug, who knows not what he has stolen......wonderful explanation and beautiful poem.

Smitten the tool of young at heart seems that the thug will be tamed...the command of the poem is great...regards

To redeem the wind and old dreams Smitten..by a thug… Who knows not..what he has stolen.. My heart it is…poor devil… Leave not…walk the walk..talk the talk.. Nay..he said..too tired to walk..too lazy to talk… I want to sink into the depths love the bite of life

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal