Monday, June 26, 2006

Smille Comments

Rating: 2.8

When I think of you I smile
But all I have of you is a pile
A pile of letters,
But its as light as a feather
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lilly mandrell
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Tearon Uzuki 09 December 2006

The last line makes it worthwhile, but be careful with the spelling. It's a pet peeve of mine, but I know that it bugs other people.

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Ndidi Ubogu 09 July 2006

sweet. i like this poem because of its rhyme, and i think u re doing very good in that area. also i like the conclusion and i wait to read more sweet and simple poems from you. good effort

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