Thursday, February 27, 2014

Smiling Through It All Comments

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How often I told him I loved him,
He answered so casually,
Careless words that held no worth,
Feelings returned impersonally
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Lora Colon
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Khairul Ahsan 10 March 2014

Hardly do I come across a poem that carries so intense pathos. 'Not once did he say he loved me, No feelings to mutually share; I never dwelled within his heart, And soon, hope turned to despair' - Very heavy!

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Md Elias Uddin 01 March 2014

I always smiled to see the gladness I was bringing to his heart; I smiled to know that one of us Was chosen to play the part liked.

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Brian Johnston 28 February 2014

Sometimes love sucks! You know tides = gravity and the moon? But then tides always come back in? ! I think I need a Physics refresher course. I get so confused! You know I'm so glad that we have poetry to help us all understand our feelings! : -)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 28 February 2014

but my wings are forever folded... intense pathos in these words, there was no sky any more to fly to!

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