Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Smiling Sorrow Comments

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I wish you understand,
The smile on my face,
The thoughts that I had,
The question which I asked,
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Jahan Zeb
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Nabila ima 02 November 2012

Oh! ! what happen? dont be sad, be brave and happy again

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2012

Very poignant! ! ! ! good work! ! !

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Words' Knight 11 October 2012

Deep feelings in your poems I can feel them, Nice shinning poem.go on And thank you for sharing it with us.

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Saadat Tahir 11 October 2012

wah! ....khan sb @ his best... :) loved it simple charming and effusive, in spite of broaching a tough one.. ;)

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Persian Khushi 10 October 2012

Jahan this is a touching write... very heartfelt.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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