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This started somewhat weak, but really gained streanth on the way. I have noticed this in some of your other work too. You defrinately have a tallent at endings. I liked this too.

Another sad but lovely poem. I like it.: -) By the way, I have another suggestion. How about changing 'it's a deceiving another mile' to 'it's another deceiving mile, ' so it will flow better? : -)