Smiling On The Death Bed. Comments

This is a calling to leave the indellible mark of your existence.Every line of the poem has its importance.Well crafted. Please read my incomplete series 'Valmiki.Regards.

There are surely many kinds of death and many ways to look at each one. I pray that you may keep this attitude as your own death approaches. If it is idealistic still it points toward personal responsibility which is always good. I think however that there is no personal failure in acknowledging sadness and even fear at the same time we embrace faith in God's provision for our (hopefully) immortal souls. I personally see your poem more as a call to embrace the now, our own lives, than smiling at death. Death is a real mystery and for me I would rather smile at God (even if he is only in my own mind) than death. For if God is real and we do have souls then death itself does not exist and has no real power over us! Good poem!

Die a sweet death smiling on the death bed..... Wooowww...this is great..lovely write..

Fantastic message, welcome death when it comes, with a smile, aspirational work perfect 10 like to give

Die a sweet death smiling on the death bed. excellent. Enjoyed,

Another of your creations that deserves mention. Good Work!