Friday, December 19, 2008

Smiling Moon Comments

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I wandered lonely as the cloud
That floats in the sky, as usual
There found something amazing
Is that the smiling moon
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Archana Prabahar
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Sabrina Jubahar 02 January 2009

Lovely writing.. I've always fancied the moon, and with your writing now, i fancy it even more!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 December 2008

Lovely poem.....smile....smile....smile everywhere....

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Kee Thampi 28 December 2008

Wandering through the winds to you Hallow.... With dreams of the smile Walked in the evening, the next day To see the smiling fairy and found The heavens from above smiling upon us. Smile, smile, smile like a smiling moon to Shower joy to the self and to the world.

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