Monday, July 12, 2010

Smiley Comments

Rating: 5.0

Curve on the lips pointing towards the left,
purpose in concealing smile by theft,
fear concluding the tilt dutifully kept,
sheen so sacred for the humanly unkempt,
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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 July 2010

So many contradictory perceptions the poet have tried to implement in a single body of Smile. Naturally reader becomes perplexed to get the right idea which poet has tried to communicate behind smiley Though it is well-known, poetry is not the article which is written under a caption. Anyway, a brain teasing spices are saturated with the writing, so, so many talks coming out from readers conscious mind. Thank you. And yet object the idea, preference of truth gift mind hates rather sometimes hatred object being uplifted to the height of its truthful identity and serenity. Regards, Apoet Bangla.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 July 2010

Smiles are always enigmatic as of Mona Lisa …actually we never smile just make a show of smile…’preference of truth gifted mind hates, ’ truth is questionable but TRUTH is unquestionable and unchallengeable… ’innocent cries must they neglect’…it is the away from TRUTH ‘lie pities truth…’ Vide supra Indeed a slicing poetry with food for deep contemplation….thanks sharing Rinky… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Amrit Rathi 14 July 2010

Wonderful and mysterious smile! You have weaved so many things around it that one marvels at your masterly art and rhyme. Since gifted mind does not prefer truth, want to be away from object which reject them, so this smile with all its purposes and tilts, secrets, and waiting bluffs the poet continuously: I think you have power-packed the smile! Thanks.

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So interesting! A clever perception put into words. Insightful.; D

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