Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, June 26, 2009

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I am living toy in family,
Lovely face and called by name Emily,
Some times I act swiftly and silly,
No to rose but they prefer to call me Lilly,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 June 2010

Very charming Poetry...' I am living toy in family, ' feel the vibes of my 'kidhood' 'Mom says Dad was so furious when I was born' Why Sir? Is it because of xx chromosome? May not be...thanks for such a smiling and heart warming poetry 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Smiley Hooker 29 August 2009

You put another meaningful thoughts to the word 'smiley.' very nice! :)

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Anthony Foster 27 August 2009

Something oh so special so new but oh so real, such sheer delight such love and joy this is what is its all about.10 10 10

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 21 August 2009

Many curse us but I always smile, Happiness at home brought for while, What else small babies can do? Fortunes and favours elders undo How nice!

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Pittle Shaileja 26 July 2009

I am treasure in my family, Lovely and cute by name Emily, Some times act swiftly and so silly, child is liked by allin the family and star attraction...10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 25 July 2009

I am treasure in my family, Lovely and cute by name Emily, Some times act swiftly and so silly, Rose to one side but they prefer me as Lilly, child has special role in family...10

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 24 July 2009

I am treasure in my family, Lovely and cute by name Emily, kids alwys loved in the family...10

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Vinod Karmakar 23 July 2009

came to know why flowers are preferred. Beauty and delicacy given name and refereed...flowers and kids same...10

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Dalsukh S 23 July 2009

came to know why flowers are preferred. Beauty and delicacy given name and refereed, Pink cheeks and face always compared, With beautiful child and reared, ...kids are like flowers...10

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Trevor William 23 July 2009

am treasure in my family, Lovely and cute by name Emily, ..kids aare always liked in family....10

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Pradip Pillai 23 July 2009

am treasure in my family, Lovely and cute by name Emily, lovely toy in family....10

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Sejal Kapadia 21 July 2009

I am treasure in my family, kid has special place infamily...10

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Chand Shikari 17 July 2009

I am treasure in my family, Lovely and cute by name Emily, loved by everybody at home...10

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 09 July 2009

I am treasure in my family, kids occupy very good positioninfamily and loved by all... very good family poem nwell depicted...10

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Many curse us but I always smile, Happiness at home brought for while, What else small babies can do? Fortunes and favours elders undo...children are liked at home by everybody ....10

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Sayz LFlynn 02 July 2009

reminds me of my youngest sister emilly as she is spoilt, lovely poem 10+

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Lady Grace 27 June 2009

rhyming of words are really pleasant to read..this poem is a very beautiful one.. a children or shall i say, a family in a very warm tie..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

'Babies boom worry the world, Population rise and relations cold, Scarce means and misery unfold, Sufferings more with tales untold, ' Beautiful poem, love the above lines most.10+++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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