Monday, June 24, 2013

Smiles & Scars Comments

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i cursed god for my fate,
i cursed myself for being always late.

i hated god for giving me tears,
i hated myself for living in fears.
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JENIE FRANKSAY
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 November 2018

whatever happened, all had a cause. so i moved on without pause. i was changed with life's turns, as paper into ashes when it burns. beautiful words full of iimagination...i danced with the stars and walked on the milky way to realise life has both smiles and scars. wonderful poem dear poetess. tony

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Naila Rais 16 June 2018

Such a true piece.. I love it. Keep courage...10 +++... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too or the last kiss with death ... I understand it deeply and it moved me.. We ourselves are wrong.. Naila

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 March 2017

Very poignant and serious write. Profound feelings expressed in extremely poetic words.Touching.

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Vishal Sharma 13 August 2015

nostalgic write awesome word selection and a great meaning inside

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Akhtar Jawad 30 March 2015

A great thoughtful poem................................10

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Tripsha Ghosh 04 July 2013

True and awesome poem

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Khairul Ahsan 02 July 2013

The last two lines sum it up. An inspiring piece of poetry. I liked the other poets' comments too, all inspirational. whatever happened, all had a cause. so i moved on without pause. On, on! Move on baby!

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Ambrosia A 26 June 2013

Life becomes beautiful, when we learn to heal those scars with a smile. Keep penning, it repairs all your scars and bring back that smile.

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Soumita Sarkar 25 June 2013

Good read............Thanks.

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Survi Sharma 24 June 2013

nicely written and influencial true and natural poem liked a lot

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Ponniah Ganeshan 24 June 2013

Yes. Life has ups and down. You walked with stars, realizing that the life gives both smiles and scars

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 June 2013

The last line is beautiful. Joy and sorrow - two sides of a coin.

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Vishal Sharma 24 June 2013

true lines, fascinating and moving one heart touching and a great verse

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