Friday, December 4, 2015

Smiles Make Me Smile Comments

Rating: 4.9

Begin and end
With a great smile
I'm glad that I get a chance to watch you grow,
Enjoying, cuddling and praising
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Mariyam Reyshma
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Chinedu Dike 29 March 2020

A very compassionate piece of poetry written with conviction, focused and factual. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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A B Faniki 02 February 2020

A heartfelt piece, that express love that stem from motherhood, a lovely piece indeed keep them coming.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2020

very beautiful poem.. loved it.. real 10 for u never to separate and never to un-relate but celebrate each moment Hasmukh Mehta

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2020

I feel that I have the most precious jewel Holding my neck tightly I'm so proud of you To my lovely daughter and son, I love you so much. poem gets a greater value with the wonderful graphic. thank u. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 April 2016

It's a great special bond! Nice work.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 11 January 2016

A lovely poem.Feel it.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Children are so wonderful, loving you, smiling with peace in their hearts and the jewels of love sparkling from their eyes for their mother. Beautiful smiles bring joy to the heart. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Mariyam Reyshma 11 January 2016

Thank you Rose :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2015

Yes, you are lucky to speak with honesty as you are gifted by an almighty to fulfill the duty females have that guts to speak with no ifs and buts but to speak openly and feel heavenly she can't hide emotions as felt in bond and relation that is her real feeling and virtually telling

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Paul Warren 29 December 2015

A poem that has a smile in itself

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 December 2015

A lovely poem and a lovely picture too. Felt so cozy and comfortable huddled together so lovingly. Mummy with her two sweet kids. Moving imagery!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 11 December 2015

It is truly appealing and touching too. Thanks Mariyam, for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 11 December 2015

Amazing articulation coupled with a wonderful narrative about a perfect happy family. Thanks. I'm happy there's you / To lighten up my day / With a great smile / And open up the door for the bright future,

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Mariyam Reyshma 06 December 2015

Ofcause mother and kids relationship is the most complex..No matter how far away both lives no one can break them apart.....Thank you all..: D

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Bharati Nayak 06 December 2015

I am happy there's you To lighten up my day With a great smile And open up the door for the bright future- - Children are our future.Our joy and sorrows are connected with their joy and sorrow.They carry a bit of our personality.Our love and care make them grow.Their love for us also make our day.Their achievements are our pride.They are like precious jewels and really fill our life with happiness.Your poem reflects your feelings for children so nicely.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 December 2015

I feel that I have the most precious jewel Holding my neck tightly I'm so proud of you To my lovely daughter and son, I love you so much. A wonderful praise of your daughter and son. love this poem very much. in very simple words you are proclaiming your love of your life. thank you very much. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2015

To lighten up my day with the works of love. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Mariyam Reyshma 04 December 2015

Thank you... :)

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