Sunday, December 17, 2017

Smiles And Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes he smiled but sometimes his laughter!
Sometimes with tears but sometimes in his broken heart!
In all his deeds I see an art.
Exposing his joy in a naughty laughter
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Indira Renganathan 22 December 2017

The true nature of man...in fact the whole creation functioning by the pull of two opposite forces...there isn't life without day and night, or a positive and a negative...so too are the smiles and tears...deep, thoughtful work Akhtar

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 December 2017

A thoughtful poem................................................................

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Valsa George 18 December 2017

Tears are cathartic! They wash away our sorrows! So like our smiles, tears also are our true friends! This poem presents a great philosophical and psychological truth!

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

A friend in need is a friend indeed., someone who can turn tears into smile.. Excellent poem

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English Poet 17 December 2017

You outshine your peers on this site.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2017

A beautifully crafted write. It captures the two most formidable human expressions that could strongly affect behavior. Great piece..10

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Ravi Kopra 17 December 2017

bahut khoob, Jawad sahib! aap ko PM bheja tha Momin ki ghazal k baaray kya bhool gaey hum ko ya fursat nahin thee?

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