Monday, May 17, 2010

Smiles Comments

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Smiles on the out,
But I really want to shout.
I can't take it anymore.
the pain makes me sore.
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Jennifer Gordon
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Carl - 17 May 2010

Good poem, I like it cause you really wrote what you were thinking at the moment 'You see happy. I see sad, Sometimes I just get mad. Why won't anyone notice for this, that all I want is bliss.' I agree, it's really frustrating that some people seem to see nothing even when things are obvious.

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Florence Badejo 17 May 2010

i like this poem. ive felt like this a lot

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