Wednesday, July 27, 2016

Smiles Comments

Rating: 5.0

When my father smiled,
I thought I am lovely,
when my mother smiled,
I thought she is lovely,
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Luz Hanaii 22 May 2019

Aw, this is so beautiful and wise. I loved it. Big 10+++ 🌞

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2016

Wow....Loved reading it. Beautiful write. Smiles fulfills the heart.

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Valsa George 29 July 2016

Through simple and lovely words you have unraveled the whole chemistry of love! I have seen that the bond between a father and daughter is something special.... But in my case, it was more a feeling of respect and a kind of awe than love that I had for my father!

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Khalid Saifullah 28 July 2016

A lovely poem.................................

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Nosheen Irfan 28 July 2016

Such a lovely poem. The beauty of relations is depicted in a simple yet powerful way. Yes, the love between a father n daughter is the most beautiful. Thanku for sharing.10

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Kelly Kurt 27 July 2016

This is beautiful, my friend! I have four daughters (And two sons) and their smiles have always made me think the same thing. A ten is not enough to give as a rating but it will have to do

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