Monday, June 8, 2009

Smiles Comments

Rating: 5.0

May smiles be the link;
Between you and me.
May smiles be the spirit.
That sets us free
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Nikunj Sharma
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Linda Ori 16 October 2009

Very wise advice. No matter how badly you're feeling, if you smile, it takes the edge off and makes you feel better. A smile can open many doors and lights the way to happiness and fulfillment. A very nicely written poem, with very effective use of repetition of the central theme. Linda :) :) :) :) :) :) ! ! ! !

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Catrina Heart 31 August 2009

I love your theme and everything about what you have said about smile...Wish smile will light all burdens and make all hearts breathe in angelic wash! ! ! 10+++++

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I love smiles.. and i love this poem. i love things that make smile.. i love this poem

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Seema Aarella 31 August 2009

I am all smiles already....waiting for others to join in, nice one....... thanks for sharing!

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Farah Aliah 30 August 2009

I like the part May smiles be the reason For us to say wow

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jimmy zepp 29 August 2009

Yes..Smiles are rare these days...Let's hope for a smiley future for us all...10+

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Beauty Philosophy 29 August 2009

A very positive view of life that may inhale all the pains of the world...One has to smile since we'll take nothing with us in our passage to the afterlife...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 August 2009

right in every wrong....smile the most optimistic thing in life when it comes from the heart when the eyes takes a part

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Linda Moore 29 August 2009

Smiling at you.....Very cleverly written, very lovely also.....10+

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A precious and thoughtful poem with a wonderful message. The rhythm and rhyme is excellent and the last stanza rejoiced a big smile to me. 10 love Karin

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Rehana Nazli 19 August 2009

May smiles be our companion; Between life and death. wow..i am smiling again. it is a beautiful poem with all the unthinkable to think.

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smiles are precious gift which attracts easily people around us! ! ! may the smiles widespread everywhere! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! great poem!

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Marilyn Lott 23 July 2009

This is beautiful and the smile on your face shows there is always a smile in your heart. A poem worth remembering and living by. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Lady Grace 23 July 2009

may smiles smile on us and be the bridge of our friendship may smiles smile on us inspire us everyday..

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Bele Lele 20 July 2009

:) this is so swet.well done

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Subroto Chatterjee 18 July 2009

You have the reason to smile away...more so when you cause it to others. Good prescription during today's troubled times... Cheers. Subroto

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may smile be there on your face after reading so many readers comments :) nice poem, nice rhyming...

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I love the end! Nicely rhymed. Smiles really do say alot and you expressed what they say well in this poem.

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Nooruddeen Mm 04 July 2009

I love it You have expressed well Thak you for sharing Nooruddeen

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Vanessa Hernandez 02 July 2009

good poem its very unique on how you expressed 'smile' good job

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