Smile While You Look Around Comments

stanza 6: This was well-composed and well-rhymed. But, at WHAT am I to supposed to 'look around'? Hmm? **** stars

stanza 5: How close have YOU been to see all the teeth in a hippo's mouth? You might find MORE teeth than you expected. I looked up 'dentation of hippos' & the info was intereting, though some text implied that a hippo does NOT eat meat, which may NOT be true of some.

stanza 4: THIS ONE I did NOT think was funny (ha ha funny) , but, instead, funny (strange) . WHO, if anyone, was the lawyer working for? ? I'd disbar her/him FAST! ! ! ! !

stanza 3: 'You' altered an OLD(er) riddle-joke (about 'why did the chicken cross the road') and it's funny. I wonder, did YOU do it?

Iine 2: I 'had to' read this twice before a hearty (not TOO hearty) laugh burst from my mouth. I'm still not sure I 'picture' the scene, but..... ;) line 4: again I had to 'tax my brain' aka 'make my brain work (more) ' before dedidine WHAT WAS FUNNY.

Really your poem caused laughter.nice and nice.

Nice humorous couplets.