Smile When The Sun Don'T Shine Comments

Very sad but a good lesson is learned you don't need money or nice things to be happy just with love and kindness will you find happiness and a smile

yes sun you put as the symbol and sign of pleasure, thats why you say. smile when then sun is arosen..well it hase many multiple meanings and the idea of poem is enough rich..enjoyed it alot and well written... liked it and appreciate your work....10/10

very nice rhyming and good end.

Everyday... Wore tattered clothes. Having to deal with the Oohs, Ahs, and Ohs. Never did she, it is tragedy of life n u have depicted well woth good choice of words... keep it up...10 read mine hair n hustle and how r u?

Well I was about to give up on this poem until it reached the end. Your ending was one of the best I have read and it 'saved the poem' as some might say. The beginning is more important than the ending and I wish there was more there. All in all this was a nicely expressive piece which kept my interest till the end. GW62 I hope you will visit me and read 'This Is Beauty.'