Thursday, December 17, 2015

Smile We See Inside Veil Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cloud has covered half
You are smiling within
Dear newborn sun you are
Fresh East is looking at.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 18 October 2020

Smile inside veil looks so smiling and nice. God is ever great. He care for us. This poem is interesting.

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 July 2019

You have a rare style, dear poet, that reminds one of a child's creativity and freshness. This piece is uplifting.

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Pushpendra Patel 19 February 2019

Great is God who creates the beauty in nature. You have caught a greatest beauty through your poetic eyes. This poem is lovely. Thank you very much for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 17 December 2015

Your style is always uplifting. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2015

A smile brings joy to the heart. Nice work.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 December 2015

Inside veil you dwell well. You swim in love to light the earth. Mind-blowing imagery. Great descriptive write.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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