Monday, June 7, 2010

Smile To Keep From Crying Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wrote this after getting an amazing smile from a beautiful girl, and as well intentioned as it was I could just tell she was smiling to keep from crying or at the very least having one of those days...

I can read you
Your pain is written in your lines
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Darrin McMiller Jr.
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Konstantin Filipov 15 July 2010

beautiful and sad at the same time, great stuff!

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Havana Schultz 15 June 2010

I love your poem! You're a great writer.

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Broken Heart 14 June 2010

I can relate to this poem! ! Great poem! !

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Mrs.Joseph =) 14 June 2010

Such a Great poem i cane relate to this too

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wow...i can so relate to this poem i smile 2 keep frm crying its been lyke tht 4 a while. Wonderful Poem Darrin :) 10/10++++

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