Monday, October 14, 2019

Smile The Sole Rhyme Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a crucial time
Of adversity,
Smile, to change the clime.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 17 October 2019

yeah; exactly a smile can change mostly horrified situation! ! !

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 October 2019

Yes of course dear poet Mahtab, thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 October 2019

Like the muse of the Nile, A mile away from someone; While the beauty of life blesses us. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 October 2019

Like the muse of the Nile... Thanks for your three-liner in response, dear poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2019

Smile is the key of the heart. It has power to make glee in any situation either on adversity or in crucial time. A brilliant haiku with lofty theme is wisely and amusingly delineated. Thank you a lot dear Pathak sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

I agree with you: smile is the key to reach any heart, thanks for your encouraging words.

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Anjandev Roy 15 October 2019

Wisely depicted.Thanu.anjandev Roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

Thanks indeed, Aniruddha

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2019

Smile, to change the clime...brilliantly expressed sir! It's captivating cute poem......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

Brilliant, captivating, and cute and 10, I appreciate your encouraging words.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 October 2019

An inspiring write, sir Aniruddha....10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

Thank you Rev Bernard for finding it to your liking, and rating it so high.

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