What Jack says this is his smile,
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Cutter cuts nail and is this his style?
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Wondrous imagery and story line, very humorous! .. Thank you for bringing us smiles! .. :) Thank you for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Of late, you prove that every style yields to your poetic creation. This is unique, quite different from your usual style! I am sure this humorous and beautifully rhyming poem will be greatly relished by children. A sure 10
There's a current of drama and tension running through your words. At the same time, this poem is an ideal rhyme...for children, perhaps. Magnificent work, Kumarmani.
LAST PART: Smile associates me with that Smile Professor in India, he gives lectures in SMILE, really and you will stay young a very long time, he says and healthy, meanwhile I pray in silence for my dear spouse who has flu. Thank you for sharing this humorous poem. G.B.U and your beloved family in Abundance. Amen. A 10++++++++++.
About Cutter cuts nail, such hilarious poem and so many rhyming endings. It was meant to be humorous and it IS full of humor. Thank you for presenting SMILE SMILE during these cold and chilly days in my country. Smiles make me feel warmer than usual, oh I forgot I am wearing my winterjack now.
Humour at it's best. Smile smile is an appropriate title to this wonderful echo verses. Crafty poem.10++
Why did jack cut nail? His nails are are flying after cutting. Ha..ha..ha..ha..what an amazing funny poem you have composed! Let me smile large for this smile poem.
Wow....this humorous poem really made my day! The echo format gives it even more character, and makes one able to memorise and recite it. Absolutely great!
Not only you are spiritual but also you are fun-giving person. I am astonished reading this poem. Jack's nails do magic here. Indeed this is a very funny poem.
hahahah i really smiled after reading your poem. so you are expressing your smiling side and jovial nature dear poet. thank u. tony
An echo poem! ! Never heard of it before. Found this very amusing! ! ! Thank you
Ha ha ha A funny write of delight. Amazingly humorous specially this line: Wow, Jack's cut nails are running towards sky. Well crafted write.10
Let me smile more reading this poem. This is wonderful to me. Jack's picture with nail is funny.
Dear poet, you are very funny. How do you get such idea? I wonder. I hear the sweet fun giving humorous echo of this poem. Your choosing of nail picture is fantastic. Without giggling I cannot stop.
A smile wins the heart and a smile motivates mind giving us joy. Every smiling person is joyful to reflect inner feeling. This poem is very fun giving to me.