Thursday, November 8, 2018

Smile Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

What Jack says this is his smile,
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Cutter cuts nail and is this his style?
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 13 June 2020

A smile wins the heart and a smile motivates mind giving us joy. Every smiling person is joyful to reflect inner feeling. This poem is very fun giving to me.

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Suzon Albert 19 November 2018

Rhythmic poem, flow is flawless.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2018

Wondrous imagery and story line, very humorous! .. Thank you for bringing us smiles! .. :) Thank you for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Valsa George 12 November 2018

Of late, you prove that every style yields to your poetic creation. This is unique, quite different from your usual style! I am sure this humorous and beautifully rhyming poem will be greatly relished by children. A sure 10

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Mj Lemon 12 November 2018

There's a current of drama and tension running through your words. At the same time, this poem is an ideal rhyme...for children, perhaps. Magnificent work, Kumarmani.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 November 2018

LAST PART: Smile associates me with that Smile Professor in India, he gives lectures in SMILE, really and you will stay young a very long time, he says and healthy, meanwhile I pray in silence for my dear spouse who has flu. Thank you for sharing this humorous poem. G.B.U and your beloved family in Abundance. Amen. A 10++++++++++.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 November 2018

About Cutter cuts nail, such hilarious poem and so many rhyming endings. It was meant to be humorous and it IS full of humor. Thank you for presenting SMILE SMILE during these cold and chilly days in my country. Smiles make me feel warmer than usual, oh I forgot I am wearing my winterjack now.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2018

lovely and interesting poem and poetic style

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2018

Humour at it's best. Smile smile is an appropriate title to this wonderful echo verses. Crafty poem.10++

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Barium Muserounica 09 November 2018

Why did jack cut nail? His nails are are flying after cutting. Ha..ha..ha..ha..what an amazing funny poem you have composed! Let me smile large for this smile poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 November 2018

Wow....this humorous poem really made my day! The echo format gives it even more character, and makes one able to memorise and recite it. Absolutely great!

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Dylan Chris 09 November 2018

Not only you are spiritual but also you are fun-giving person. I am astonished reading this poem. Jack's nails do magic here. Indeed this is a very funny poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 November 2018

hahahah i really smiled after reading your poem. so you are expressing your smiling side and jovial nature dear poet. thank u. tony

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Susan Williams 08 November 2018

An echo poem! ! Never heard of it before. Found this very amusing! ! ! Thank you

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 November 2018

Ha ha ha A funny write of delight. Amazingly humorous specially this line: Wow, Jack's cut nails are running towards sky. Well crafted write.10

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Kalpana Barik 08 November 2018

Let me smile more reading this poem. This is wonderful to me. Jack's picture with nail is funny.

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Dogma Daniman 08 November 2018

Dear poet, you are very funny. How do you get such idea? I wonder. I hear the sweet fun giving humorous echo of this poem. Your choosing of nail picture is fantastic. Without giggling I cannot stop.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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